by Protagonist X » Tue Apr 29, 2003 1:14 pm
bruce wrote:Ice Cream Jonsey wrote:
What didn't you like about the Diamond Age? I don't know anything about it except what's being said in this thread.
I liked it right up until the end, when Stephenson's editor apparently called him up and said, "Hey, that's 75,000 words. You can quit now."
Bruce
All his stuff ends like that, it's true. The most satisfying final paragraph I think he's written was at the end of In the Beginning Was the Command Line, which is (of all things) a nonfiction essay. I take that back: Zodiac actually coasts to a stop over the course of a few pages, instead of his customary "OK, all the plot threads are tied up, let's hit the brakes hard at the end of... hmm... this paragraph I'm typing right
here."
[Cue SFX: screeching metal of beautiful train braking to zero mph in an absurdly brief timeframe.]
There was a maxim a screenwriting prof of mine had. Given the choice between ending the story (A) too soon, (B) too late, and (C) at the exact right time, which should you choose? His answer was that (A) and (C) are the same; you should always leave the audience wanting more.
When I ended Snow Crash, I wondered if Stephenson had had similar advice in the past and gone a little too aggressively with it. Still, he's one of my favorite living authors, and I loved all of his books (
Diamond Age and even
The Big U included) despite the endings. And I indeed wanted more when I was done with his books.
Vitriola wrote:Anyway, Diamond Age was just, I mean, imagine if you were making cereal in the morning, and you pour out your Cocoa Puffs of whatever you eat in the morning that makes you the spaz you are, and then you go to pour out the milk, and it's pouring, and it's white, and you're thinking 'yummy', and then the milk turns pink, then red, and a severed kitten head comes out of the milk opening and lands right on top of your nicely mounded pile of Cocoa Puffs. That's Diamond Age.
Sorry, I'm not following you, other than that there was something other than the ending that really failed to light your fire?
[quote="bruce"][quote="Ice Cream Jonsey"]
What didn't you like about the Diamond Age? I don't know anything about it except what's being said in this thread.[/quote]
I liked it right up until the end, when Stephenson's editor apparently called him up and said, "Hey, that's 75,000 words. You can quit now."
Bruce[/quote]
All his stuff ends like that, it's true. The most satisfying final paragraph I think he's written was at the end of In the Beginning Was the Command Line, which is (of all things) a nonfiction essay. I take that back: Zodiac actually coasts to a stop over the course of a few pages, instead of his customary "OK, all the plot threads are tied up, let's hit the brakes hard at the end of... hmm... this paragraph I'm typing right [i][b]here[/b][/i]."
[Cue SFX: screeching metal of beautiful train braking to zero mph in an absurdly brief timeframe.]
There was a maxim a screenwriting prof of mine had. Given the choice between ending the story (A) too soon, (B) too late, and (C) at the exact right time, which should you choose? His answer was that (A) and (C) are the same; you should always leave the audience wanting more.
When I ended Snow Crash, I wondered if Stephenson had had similar advice in the past and gone a little too aggressively with it. Still, he's one of my favorite living authors, and I loved all of his books ([i]Diamond Age[/i] and even [i]The Big U[/i] included) despite the endings. And I indeed wanted more when I was done with his books.
[quote="Vitriola"]Anyway, Diamond Age was just, I mean, imagine if you were making cereal in the morning, and you pour out your Cocoa Puffs of whatever you eat in the morning that makes you the spaz you are, and then you go to pour out the milk, and it's pouring, and it's white, and you're thinking 'yummy', and then the milk turns pink, then red, and a severed kitten head comes out of the milk opening and lands right on top of your nicely mounded pile of Cocoa Puffs. That's Diamond Age. [/quote]
Sorry, I'm not following you, other than that there was something other than the ending that really failed to light your fire?