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Ice Cream Jonsey · Post by **Ice Cream Jonsey** » Wed Jul 23, 2014 9:10 pm

Thread #1: I would like to read THE TAKEOVER MAN by Paul "Tdarcos" Robinson.

Paul, do you have an electronic copy of the book? You said in the Troll Room a few years ago that it was 92 pages. I'm ready to read and review.

Tdarcos · Post by **Tdarcos** » Thu Jul 24, 2014 6:24 am

Ice Cream Jonsey wrote:Thread #1: I would like to read THE TAKEOVER MAN by Paul "Tdarcos" Robinson.

Paul, do you have an electronic copy of the book? You said in the Troll Room a few years ago that it was 92 pages. I'm ready to read and review.

Yeah, well, two things: (1) It's 150 pages now; (2) it's not finished, there are two major parts missing (that I have to do). (A) Tie in the reason the senator dies to the need to support cloning; (B) add the ending on what happens, about a thousand years later (and why).

It's also not formatted, I've just been writing the story, and while it does have chapters and is a coherent story, it's not in a nice formatted layout like a regular book.

I'll e-mail you a copy and I will appreciate any comments, even if I disagree with them. On the other hand, I have accepted comments from others and made corrections when I felt they were relevant, specifically over grammar, syntax and word usage.

pinback · Post by **pinback** » Thu Jul 24, 2014 7:12 am

When you finish all ten, are we shuttin' 'er down?

Ice Cream Jonsey · Post by **Ice Cream Jonsey** » Thu Jul 24, 2014 7:26 am

I just won't have the ability to start any new threads. Then hopefully conversation trickles to a close and we forget that all of this ever happened.

I got the PDF, Paul. Updates soon.

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