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I'm counting down my last 10 threads on this BBS.
Posted: Wed Jul 23, 2014 9:10 pm
by Ice Cream Jonsey
Thread #1: I would like to read THE TAKEOVER MAN by Paul "Tdarcos" Robinson.
Paul, do you have an electronic copy of the book? You said in the Troll Room a few years ago that it was 92 pages. I'm ready to read and review.
Re: I'm counting down my last 10 threads on this BBS.
Posted: Thu Jul 24, 2014 6:24 am
by Tdarcos
Ice Cream Jonsey wrote:Thread #1: I would like to read THE TAKEOVER MAN by Paul "Tdarcos" Robinson.
Paul, do you have an electronic copy of the book? You said in the Troll Room a few years ago that it was 92 pages. I'm ready to read and review.
Yeah, well, two things: (1) It's 150 pages now; (2) it's not finished, there are two major parts missing (that I have to do). (A) Tie in the reason the senator dies to the need to support cloning; (B) add the ending on what happens, about a thousand years later (and why).
It's also not formatted, I've just been writing the story, and while it does have chapters and is a coherent story, it's not in a nice formatted layout like a regular book.
I'll e-mail you a copy and I will appreciate any comments, even if I disagree with them. On the other hand, I have accepted comments from others and made corrections when I felt they were relevant, specifically over grammar, syntax and word usage.
Posted: Thu Jul 24, 2014 7:12 am
by pinback
When you finish all ten, are we shuttin' 'er down?
Posted: Thu Jul 24, 2014 7:26 am
by Ice Cream Jonsey
I just won't have the ability to start any new threads. Then hopefully conversation trickles to a close and we forget that all of this ever happened.
I got the PDF, Paul. Updates soon.